This poem was written in response to this week’s W3 poetry prompt. 16 lines or less, the first and the last line have to be the same. Here’s the link if you want to read the full description: https://skepticskaddish.com/2022/05/25/w3-prompt-4-weave-written-weekly/
Let the mud sink
Let the mud sink,
nourish your soul.
Don’t stir,
what wants to fall,
grow heavy,
rest.
Allow sediment to settle,
where it’s needed the most.
Remember,
mess on mess,
layers of experience,
dirt,
just another word
for fertile soil.
Please,
let the mud sink.
Wonderful phrasing and message that resonates with me.
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Thank you so much!
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I love your original take on the prompt. It’s something I hadn’t thought of. Great play with line length (not sure what that’s called in poetry) too.
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Thank you so much for your comment, Astrid. Much appreciated. 🤓
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You have turned mud into beautiful work of art. Mud is life. Lovely composition.
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Thank you so much for your lovely comment. Much appreciated 💜
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Hi, Britta ❤
The 5th W3 prompt, hosted by murisopsis is now live! Enjoy:
Much love,
David
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