
This tanka is my response to the tanka Tuesday poetry challenge on Wordcraft Poetry. Here’s the full link: https://wordcraftpoetry.com/2022/07/05/tankatuesday-weekly-poetry-challenge-no-279-tastetherainbow-color-weather-poetry/
How to measure space-time on summer holidays
We drive 500 miles to get from the heart of Scotland to Dover. We take a ferry and then, we drive another 500 miles. Our journey starts in robust denims, long sleeves and jumpers, just to be safe. By the time we hit the south of England, my cardigan, stubborn remnant of winter, has long gone into the boot and even the sea breeze on the Channel cannot stop our the sleeves of our tops from curling up, bit by bit, in a slow, premeditated reveal, suspense and all. The moment we reach France, our cheeks glow rosy, then ruby red, and the mercury keeps rising as we belt through Belgium. Into Germany we thunder. Hotter still. We sit in not much more than flimsy lycra swimming gear, sweltering, boil in the bag humans, roasted inside our tiny car like a novelty Sunday lunch. Our skin turns from almost blue and translucent, the trademark Scottish palest of pale, to a nice, healthy pink, and then, in a seamless manner, keeps going towards the more alarming shades of red. Not so much a rainbow of colours… This is the colour scheme of blood, crimson and cinnabar, no hue spared. Perhaps we should have stopped our trip somewhere near Birmingham, before the burn, but we feel unstoppable. Our holiday, a once in a life time journey to the centre of the universe. Bring on the heat!
Our front door snaps shut.
We, milky, iridescent,
drive towards summer.
Time, measured in fifty shades
of blush, cherry and garnet.
I hope you get lots of sun and turn the deepest shade of red without getting sunburn. Now that’ll be getting the most of your time, travel, and location. Enjoy! 🙂
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I am covered in factor 50 sun block. Wouldn’t venture out without it here. Especially in the first week. My skin isn’t used to ‘actual’ sun rays. I do get temporarily red, full on lobster, due to the heat. Again, I’m so not used to temperatures in the proper summer range. It’s July, I’m in Germany, and for the first time this year, I’m not wearing a woolly cardigan…
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Yayy!! I have to say it for you. 🙂
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Superb tanka. I hope you have a magnificent time over there with Dad.
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Thanks, Peter. I’m still very new to tanka, but I like the idea of a little paragraph, a short story before a poem. It’s what I tend to do anyway, tanka or not.
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Oh! This is wonderful I hope you are all having a wonderful time. This is a great entree 💜💜💜
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Thank you so much, willowdot21, for your lovely comment. I’m enjoying the warmth here in Germany. Makes quite a change to my usual Scottish temperatures… For the first time this year, I’m not snuggled up in a cardigan. Feels quite nice!
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I bet it does and you described it beautifully I could feel the journey into warmth 💜
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Fantastic, Britta! I love the ‘boil in a bag humans’. So much wonderful imagery in this 💕🙂
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Thanks, Harmony. Three days into my summer holidays, I’m getting a little more used to the hot temperatures and I fight the feeling of being a ‘boil in a bag human’ with copious amounts of ice cream. Thanks for reading and commenting! Much appreciated.
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Enjoyable read!!
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Thanks, Ruth. Much appreciated.
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I hope you are enjoying your time. Great tanka.
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Thanks for reading and commenting! Much appreciated.
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Great poem, Britta! I was blessed with olive skin that almost never burns. I spend long days on beaches (wearing SPF 50 or 70, mostly for the protective benefits from harmful rays). The locals can always identify the tourists because they are sporting lobster red on their skin. The inexperienced forget how powerful the sun can be. I’m happy you protect your skin. I’m even happier that you are on what sounds like an amazing adventure. Enjoy! 🙂
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting, Yvette. I really need the factor 50 sunscreen! I’m slowly getting used to summer, my skin has changed from milky blue to simply pale in the past four days. I’m almost looking like a healthy vampire. Yay! I’m on my way…
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Britta, this is excellent tanka prose. I love your rich descriptions. I think my temperature rose along with your travels. LOL! Love this! ❤
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Thank you so much for your lovely comment, Colleen. Much appreciated.
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very clever use of color, Britta! ❤
(and ouch!)
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Thanks, David. Much appreciated.
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Love your tanka.
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Thanks, Jude. Much appreciated.
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A pleasure.
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Enjoy! (but use plenty of sunscreen…) (K)
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I can’t even contemplate leaving the house here without my factor 50 sunblock. I’d burn to a crisp without it! Thanks for reading and commenting. Much appreciated.
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