
Here’s my response to this week’s W3 poetry challenge.
The prompt guideline, set by Sylvia Cognac: write a poem that contains the word ‘water’. Here’s the link to the full blog post: https://skepticskaddish.com/2022/08/03/w3-prompt-14-weave-written-weekly/
I write about water a lot. It’s one of my favourite subject that never ceases to amaze me. Perhaps it’s due to the fact that I was born in a place, as landlogged as one could possibly imagine…
I now live in Scotland with water everywhere, left, right, top and bottom. Even after more than two decades in my ‘new’ country, I appreciate the unashamed novelty of ocean, drop by drop. I cannot help but look at water like I’ve never seen it before, for the simple fact that I’ve never seen THIS water before.
So, here goes. Water.
Longing for water Longing for water, want of drifting. My speck in amongst souls, like plankton. Food for someone. Longing for water, medium of flow and undertow. One continuous journey with the murmurs of a heartbeat that does not need to arrive. Longing for water, the tickling freshness of currents. Temperature changes in swirls. To be nothing in something and everything in this all. Longing for water. When I’m truly rested in the ease of travel, I’ll remember who I am. And then, I’ll swim.
I think that longing for water may become a real issue in the not too distant future!
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I love how alive water is in your words! Scotland is beautiful! I had the pleasure of living there for 6 months about a decade ago; it’s the only place I’ve lived outside of the Midwest, so I can understand your perspective of going from landlocked to surrounded by water. 😀
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I’m intrigued… Whereabouts in Scotland did you live, Sarah?
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I lived in Aberdeen! I spent a semester at the university, meeting many incredible people from around the world, and many amazing Scots as well. 🙂
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I’m glad you enjoyed your time in Scotland!
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“To be nothing in something/and everything in this all.” Wow! I’m blown away by these lines! Speechless! Wow!
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Thank you so much for your lovely comment, Valerie. Much appreciated.
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som many people are longing for water!
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Water really had become a battleground. Like the line in your W3 poem ‘wars over water
beginning and the end is your water consuming neighbour enemy or friend?’. Thanks for reading and commenting, Sean. Much appreciated.
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Congrats on being the next Poet of the Week ❤ There were so many incredible poems that it was hard to choose, but I've decided to choose this one ❤ ❤ ❤
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Thank you so much, Sylvia. Your prompt and poem have sparked such great writing, I feel very honoured to be the next W3 Poet of the week. 💜
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Britta – wow – you really got “longing” across! Stunning.
I’ve emailed you about the next W3 prompt 😀
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Thanks, David.
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Britta,
I just want to let you know that your W3 is now live:
Much love,
David
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