Life’s punctuation
Life has funny ways
of punctuating days.
Sometimes I sense the question mark
deep in my heart,
when I really need
an exclamation of certainty!
But no.
Doesn’t show.
Sometimes I feel sure,
confident,
this is my moment,
only to have my bold
statement of intent
put into speech marks,
you know the ones
made with fingers,
a ‘did you really mean that’,
scratched in the air,
eyebrows raised,
tut, tut.
Sometimes I hope
for a comma,
a continuation,
then realize
there has to be a full stop.
Non negotiable,
no back door,
no trap door,
deeds done,
moving on.
Life starts new paragraphs,
just like that,
uninvited,
while I still try to cling on
to old sentences.
Life turns pages
on the dot,
ready or not.
I often don’t like
life’s semicolons,
periods and question marks.
I remember my English teacher saying:
‘Stop complaining about the rules.
They are what they are.
Now get on with the job.
It’s for your own good!’
That’s how I learned
you can’t argue
with life’s punctuation.
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I love how you use forms of punctuation to make your point! 🙂
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Thank you so much, Angela. Much appreciated 💜.
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Oh Britta! I really enjoyed hearing you read this but now I’ve had chance to read it a few times I appreciate it so much more. I will carefully keep it as one of my favourite poems in the drawer labelled ‘Favourite Poems’ in my filing cabinet.
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Thank you so much for your lovely comment, Gail! On days when I’m missing my mojo, I just have to re-read your comments and all is well again. Much appreciated.
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I like this. Life can also be similar to musical notation. When it says “rest” you must comply!
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‘When it says rest you must comply’ – ya. So true, Peter. Wise words, as per usual.
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Now then, what inspired this I wonder 😉 ? I really enjoyed this poem. Sadly, though I loved the work that inspired it too, my mojo was absent without leave that day.
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I know the feeling. Sometimes it just doesn’t happen on the spot. Still, the prompt poems are usually well worth listening to and you can always come back to them later. I really enjoy the Expressive Writing sessions. Mojo present or not, it’s an hour well spent.
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Agreed! I’ve really liked the choice of prompt poems.
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