
Here’s my response to this week’s W3 poetry challenge. The guideline, set by Denise DeVries: Use a random word or first line generator as inspiration for your poem. You can find the full guidelines and Denise’s prompt poem here: https://skepticskaddish.com/2023/01/18/w3-prompt-38-weave-written-weekly/
So, I did just that. I used a random word generator, set it at 6 words, an equally random decision, and took a picture of the words it spat out. Here’s what I made of them:
Seize the day You, seize the day, if you please, and forgive my concerns regarding your eager search for purpose. I need a minimum of eight hours sleep! Am not available, at 4am. I admire your rigour. And then, I roll over. I have a dream waiting for me. So, yes, seize the day, if you please, and forgive my lie-ins, my slow coach approach to life and love. My body and soul, not a workout regime, nor a catch as you can, more of a kind coalition, discussing, deliberating, over a nice cup of tea. I’ll seize the day, when I’m ready, when it wants to be seized. You, go ahead. I’ll catch up with you later.
Well I think this turned out great 🙂
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Thanks, Angela. Much appreciated.
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I saw how long the queue was to seize the day and decided against joining it!
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Ha, those ‘seize the day’ queues get longer and longer! No need to queue for a lie-in, though…
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Excellent response by the way!
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Thanks, Peter. Much appreciated.
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Better than the usual bot poetry! Maybe putting in your own words is the key 😍
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Thanks, Paula. Much appreciated.
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wonderful!
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I have been so busy today that even though I have “write a AI prompt poem” on my list of things to do, I haven’t managed to write a single word. My art show set up is in 11 days and I’m still trying to get things together! Your poem is so good – I like your approach.
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Will you post about your art show? I would like to see pictures, Valerie!
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hear, hear!
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You definitely took the challenge by the horns!
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A great response to a teasingly difficult challenge.
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Thanks, Margaret. I do like restrictive challenges. In a very weird way, I think the more restrictions, the easier it gets. I take part in the W3 poetry challenge every week, whatever guidelines they throw at me. Sometimes, I’m pleased with the result, other times, not so much so. This one, I like.
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I need to get back into this. My beginner-poet mojo has gone AWOL somewhere.
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This may be the most relatable poem I’ve read in a long time, Britta ❤
Love this:
~David
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Thanks, David. Much appreciated. I love the W3 challenge. Haven’t missed a single one. Thanks for curating this wonderful platform for all sorts of poets!
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Would it be okay if I share this as a REBLOG at some point, Britta?
~David
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Sure.
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Britta, you’re the best. I’m so glad you’re part of our W3 community.
BTW, this week’s W3, hosted by the brilliant Brandon Ellrich, is now live 🙂
Enjoy ❤
~David
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I also liked the “slow coach” line. Excellent use of repetition and a nice balance of humor and philosophy.
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Ha! Love the message. The narrator has her priorities. Well done.
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Thank you! Much appreciated.
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I love the line:— I have a dream waiting for me ❤️🌹
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Thanks so much, Leslie. Much appreciated.
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Happy dreams 😊
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“Do not go gently into that dark night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light.” Except… to stop for a cup of tea… might be good, too.
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Oh, absolutely! We should always stop for a nice cup of tea before continuing with our rage. And, perhaps, there’s also time for a teensy weensy bit of cake? Just wondering…
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Mmm yes. A sweet bit of cake, or perhaps a biscuit (cookie) that melts in the mouth. Then, back to rage ha ha ha ha oh yeah it’s a date. Brisk and sweet at the same time.
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This is brilliant Britta! 👌👏Funny and true even for me of the early morning run and workout variety! 😛😂
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Thanks, Ken. Much appreciated. I’m in awe of the early morning run variety of humans! My bones always need quite a bit of time and yoga before they grudgingly agree to slot into the right position.
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I understand completely Britta! 😛😁👍 Some of our bodies need a bit more encouragement and cajoling than others.
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