Here’s my response to this week’s W3 poetry prompt, set by poet of the week Brandon Ellrich.
The challenge this week: Write a riddle or puzzle poem. You can find the full guidelines as well as Brandon’s prompt poem here: https://skepticskaddish.com/2023/01/25/w3-prompt-39-weave-written-weekly/
My contribution is not much of a riddle. You’ll instantly know what I’m talking about. It’s more of a little musing. Here goes:
Where did you go? Somewhere between ‘wait!’ and ‘hurry up!’, there’s a chase, a race, a waste of opportunity and pace. Clocks can’t control the peace of souls. Each tick, a to do. Each tock, a forget, and the numbers will never add up. We push, we shove, we cram in as much as we can until our breath runs out. Then, we stop, stare at the tide and feel so much lighter. What’s lost, a win. What’s won, a loss. We create systems, machines increase speed, and still, we can never catch up with the now. At the end of each day, we hope for balance, perhaps even credit. With empty hands we wonder: Where did you go?
Always time for a little musing!
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Ha, so true. Always time…
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Very good. I liked the sounds of some of the words you used “….a chase, a race, a waste…”
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Thanks, Brandon. And thanks for such an excellent prompt! Much appreciated.
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No problem!
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I like the direction you took this. I’m still mulling this one – it just might be impossible for me to come up with a riddle…
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Can’t wait to read the result of your ‘mulling’. ‘Looking at riddles’?
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Time? Or money?
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I was just thinking of time, but you’re right, Sadje, it would work for money, too! Thanks for reading and commenting. Much appreciated.
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Thanks Britta!
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Oh, I was thinking of money 😦 *sigh* well… it kinda works too…
❤
David
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Thanks, David. Quite a few people thought I was writing about money. And yes, it does work a bit for that one too. Thing is, though, I know exactly where my money goes. When it comes to my time, I’m not so sure…
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Yeah, that makes sense, Britta ❤
BTW: this week's W3, hosted by the brilliant Jaideep Khanduja, is now live:
Enjoy! ❤
~David
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So glad you found the Time for this one Britta nicely done 💕♥️
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Ha, ha, thanks, Angela. Much appreciated.
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A timeless response to the prompt!
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Thanks, D. Avery. Much appreciated.
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I had a lovely time reading your rhyme ❤️🌹
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Ha, thanks, Lesley. Much appreciated.
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