Now that NaPoWriMo has come to an end, I can enjoy my ‘usual’ prompt routine. TankaTuesday is one of my regular stops for inspiration and I particularly enjoy Colleen’s ekphrastic prompts. Click here to see this week’s Waldmueller painting and read the full prompt description: https://wordcraftpoetry.com/2023/05/02/tankatuesday-ekphrastic-poetry-challenge-no-318/
Waldmueller, famous for painting the detail of details, to the point of depicting the veins on the leaves, and, when it comes to trees, painting all the leaves, not a single one missed or only hinted at, oh no, no can do! I always get lost in the details of his paintings and forget about ‘the big picture’.
I chose a Shadorma poem to write about the painting ‘The Expected One’. A poem about how ‘lost in detail’ becomes ‘loss of detail’.
Waldmueller, or: Loss of detail Each thin leaf, manifest. His skill catches all… Not at all! Brushstrokes miss hole in her soul, that clearly says: No!
Good take.
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Thanks, Sadje. Much appreciated.
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My pleasure
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Ouch! Haha! This is great, Britta!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Thanks, Yvette! Much appreciated.
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I don’t know this painter, and had to ask Mr. Google. I do rather see what you mean…
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When you stand in front of one of his paintings, you really appreciate the amount of detail – and while I recognize the artistic skill, I find it very distracting. Too much detail for my liking, but hey ho, I’ve always been an impressionist by heart…
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Quite. Maybe this man should have been a botanical illustrator?
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Well done, Britta! I love your interpretation! I can see her saying no. The boy looks overly smitten to me. I’m sure he will make a fool of himself with all those pink roses. LOL!
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I was thinking the same thing, Colleen! The boy does look like he’s about to make a fool of himself. I can’t really see her being into him… Would love to listen to the exchange. And I totally ‘see’ the smartphone in her hands! Had to laugh out loud. Perhaps the guy needs to ‘tech up’. She’s clearly on Tinder, swiping away…
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Ha Ha, Britta. She’s on Tinder… That’s so funny. There has been some amazing poetry coming from this painting. It’s hard to not see a cell phone. LOL!
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Excellent Britta. There was speculation, some time ago, that the lady is using a mobile phone!
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Thanks, Peter. And yes, the mobile phone was mentioned on the prompt page. The way I see it: that lady is clearly on Tinder…
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good way of putting distraction as a “hole in her soul”
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Thank you! Much appreciated.
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You’re very welcome.
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Hans Holbein the Younger and Albrecht Dürer both created eidetic work – it must be a German thing! I love the turn in this tanka!
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Well, you may be right, Valerie, we love our detail, but one can clearly have too much detail!
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I love how you shifted in this poem! Love it!
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Thanks, Luanne. Much appreciated.
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Such a brilliant take and you say so much in so few words 💜
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Thank you! Much appreciated.
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Awwww…. poor guy! He’s trying so hard though!
Much love,
David
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I know, I know, and perhaps I’m a little too cynical. When it comes to love, there’s plenty of surprises, so he may get a happy ending after all!
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