Here’s my response to this month’s poetry challenge on Rebecca Cuningham’s Fake Flamenco blog.
In her May challenge, she uses one of my frog pictures as prompt and asks us to write a dodoitsu (a syllabic, four line poem with 7-7-7-5 syllables). You can find out more here: https://fakeflamenco.com/2024/05/05/may-2024-poetry-challenge-fraternizing-with-frogs/
By the way, you still have until Sunday to send in your response! So, what are you waiting for? The world needs more frog poetry.
It’s always a pleasure to take part in Rebecca’s challenges. She features all entries in a round-up post a few days after the deadline. As a bonus gift – and this is the bit I really, really like and appreciate – she also translates the poems into Spanish.
So, here’s my little dodoitsu about my very own pond frogs.
in amongst green polka dots
he said, she said, croak on croak
two heads slowly warming up
two hearts cooled by depth
©️2024 Britta Benson. No unauthorized use permitted.
Here’s a bit more about my picture: https://brittasblog422041504.wordpress.com/2024/05/06/frogs-going-places/
I love this, Britta. And this is the moment to ask. May I use your image in my post – if I ever get round to it – suitably acknowledged, of course?
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Thanks, Margaret, and of course you can use the image. I gave Rebecca and all the participants in the challenge permission to use it – I’m actually quite chuffed that my pond frogs have been chosen as muses! They are an inspiring bunch!
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I think so. Excellent frogs. And … thanks.
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A cute poem Britta
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Thanks, Sadje.
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Love your photo. 🐸🐸
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Hurrah for your frog photo inspiration. It’s taking the world by storm. Adore your idea of a poetry reading to the frogs that started it all. Good dodoitsu, I like how the warm and cool are in surprising lines.
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Thanks, Rebecca. I shall inform my pond frogs of the impending poetry reading. Once all the entries are on your blog, I shall perform the poems to my best ability. This should be fun. I shall keep you posted…
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Nice poem Britta. The Blogosphere is filled now with poems to Frogs. Awesome!!!
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Thanks, Tony. I’m glad there’s quite a bit more frog poetry in the bloggosphere now, thanks to the inhabitants of my garden pond. Perfect.
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Well I must say its the first time I’ve written a Poem about Frogs. I didn’t follow the rules though due to not reading the original post properly. My poem rhymes & I used different pictures.
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I always consider rules as a suggestion. Sometimes, we have to take the poem down a different alley and that’s totally fine. I just had a look at your frog poem – so glad the little froggy found a happy end!
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Thanks for checking it out Britta.
Kind regards, Tony
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